雅思写作饼图写作句型
在雅思写作Task 1中,饼图(Pie Chart)是常见的题型之一,掌握描述饼图的句型不仅能提高写作流畅度,还能帮助考生更精准地呈现数据,本文将提供实用的饼图写作句型,并结合最新数据示例,帮助考生高效备考。
饼图写作的基本结构
雅思饼图写作通常包含四个部分:
- 引言(Introduction):改写题目,说明图表主题。 Overview)**:概括主要趋势或关键数据。
- 细节段(Details):具体描述数据变化或对比。
- (可选)Conclusion):可简要重申趋势,但非必须。
描述饼图的常用句型
1 引言句型
- The pie chart(s) illustrate(s) the distribution/proportion of...
- The given pie chart(s) provide(s) information about...
- The data presented in the pie chart(s) show(s) the percentage/share of...
示例(2024年最新数据):
The pie charts illustrate the global market share of leading smartphone brands in Q1 2024.
Brand | Market Share (%) | Source |
---|---|---|
Apple | 5 | Counterpoint Research |
Samsung | 3 | Counterpoint Research |
Xiaomi | 7 | Counterpoint Research |
Oppo | 1 | Counterpoint Research |
Others | 4 | Counterpoint Research |
2 概述句型
- Overall, the largest proportion is accounted for by..., while... represents the smallest share.
- The most striking feature is that... dominates the chart, making up...
- A significant majority/minority of... is attributed to...
示例:
Overall, Apple holds the largest market share at 24.5%, while other brands collectively account for 33.4%.
3 数据对比句型
- ...constitutes/accounts for/makes up X% of the total.
- The proportion of... is slightly higher/lower than that of...
- Compared to..., ...has a significantly larger/smaller share.
示例(2024年能源结构数据):
According to the International Energy Agency (IEA), renewable energy accounted for 32% of global electricity generation in 2023, while coal contributed 28%.
Energy Source | Share (%) | Source |
---|---|---|
Renewable Energy | 32 | IEA |
Coal | 28 | IEA |
Natural Gas | 23 | IEA |
Nuclear | 10 | IEA |
Others | 7 | IEA |
4 变化趋势句型(适用于动态饼图)
- The share of... increased/decreased from X% to Y% between... and...
- There was a noticeable rise/decline in the proportion of...
- Over the given period, ...experienced the most significant growth/drop.
示例(2020-2024年电商市场份额变化):
Amazon's share of the global e-commerce market grew from 15.8% in 2020 to 19.2% in 2024, while Alibaba's share declined slightly from 22.1% to 20.5% over the same period.
高级表达技巧
1 避免重复使用"account for"
- X% of... is attributed to...
- ...comprises X% of the total.
- ...represents a mere X%.
2 使用比较级和最高级
- ...is the second-largest contributor, with X%.
- ...has a marginally higher proportion than...
3 结合趋势预测(适用于动态数据)
- If this trend continues, ...is likely to surpass... by...
- Projections suggest that... will account for over X% by...
示例(2025年预测数据):
Statista forecasts that electric vehicles will make up 18% of global car sales by 2025, up from 12% in 2023.
常见错误及改进
❌ 错误表达:The pie chart shows about the sales of phones.
✅ 改进:The pie chart illustrates the distribution of smartphone sales by brand in 2024.
❌ 错误表达:Apple is more than Samsung.
✅ 改进:Apple's market share (24.5%) is higher than Samsung's (20.3%).
实战练习
The pie charts below show the percentage of energy production from different sources in a country in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
参考范文(部分):
The pie charts compare the energy production mix in a country between 2010 and 2020. In 2010, coal was the dominant source, contributing 42%, followed by natural gas (28%) and renewables (15%). By 2020, the share of coal dropped to 32%, while renewables surged to 28%, overtaking natural gas (25%).
掌握这些句型并结合最新数据练习,考生可以更自信地应对雅思写作饼图题型,多分析权威机构发布的数据报告,如UN、World Bank或IEA,确保写作内容的准确性和可信度。